G324 - Final Magazine Advertisement

Posted by Olivia Calver

G324 - Magazine Advert Draft 4 and Feedback

Feedback 1:
This is better but where are the elements always seen on a magazine advert, such as facebook, twitter icons, star reviews etc?
I do not like the polaroid cameras on here - they look like a child's polaroid cartoon rather than a professional magazine advert.
Can you put one of the guitar photos on the left hand side rather than both of them on the right?
Change the font of the date and the featured singles and the word "the" is not required on the release date.

Posted by Olivia Calver

G324 - Final Music Video

To see the final cut of our music video, please refer to the DVD provided. We were unable to upload our final cut to YouTube due to technical issues which arose.

Posted by Olivia Calver and Samuel Skinner

G324 - Rough Cut 3 and Feedback

Feedback 1 (Jenna):
Good narrative
Lovely camera shots

Feedback 2 (Rob):
Variety of locations
Costumes were good
Nice camera angles
Lip sync was good
Don't like the shot of going over the friend's shoulder
Really like the use of slow motion

Posted by Olivia Calver and Samuel Skinner

G324 - Final Digipak

Posted by Olivia Calver

G324 - Magazine Advertisement Draft 3 and Feedback

Feedback 1:
Good use of font on the polaroid picture to create a consistent house style across all products.
The use of a Polaroid picture makes it link well with the song.
The images are too dark and squashed, plus they could link better to the digipak/ video.
The font used at the bottom is too basic.
The concept of the advert being a polaroid picture hasn't been fully justified.


Posted By Samuel Skinner

G324 - Digipak Draft 3 and Feedback

Tom:

I like the front cover, nice photography.

I would have carried on the wooden flooring background on the back cover instead of it being white.

Could you make the Thank you text font slightly bigger?

I wouldn’t carry the coffee stain onto the spine, nice idea but just leave it on the back.

Nice use of small print on back.

Erin:

I like the Polaroid pictures because it matches with the title.

I don’t like that one of the pictures is blank, it doesn’t make sense.

I like the guitar’s sound hole as the CD.

Can’t tell the narrative of the video through looking at the digipak.


Posted by Olivia Calver