Monday, 25 January 2016
Wednesday, 20 January 2016
G324 - Magazine Advert Draft 4 and Feedback
Feedback 1:
This is better but where are the elements always seen on a magazine advert, such as facebook, twitter icons, star reviews etc?
I do not like the polaroid cameras on here - they look like a child's polaroid cartoon rather than a professional magazine advert.
Can you put one of the guitar photos on the left hand side rather than both of them on the right?
Change the font of the date and the featured singles and the word "the" is not required on the release date.
Posted by Olivia Calver
This is better but where are the elements always seen on a magazine advert, such as facebook, twitter icons, star reviews etc?
I do not like the polaroid cameras on here - they look like a child's polaroid cartoon rather than a professional magazine advert.
Can you put one of the guitar photos on the left hand side rather than both of them on the right?
Change the font of the date and the featured singles and the word "the" is not required on the release date.
Posted by Olivia Calver
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