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1
I don't like the text used on the front cover.
The pictures are mainly fine but the photo of the building is out of place and doesn't match the colour scheme.
You could add some text or lyrics onto some of the photos to make them more exciting - I like a good sing song.
You need to put something on the spine.
2
The front cover needs more vibrancy; there is no clear distinction between the artist and the background. You need to make the artist pop out. The front and back cover don't quite look like polaroid pictures... and there needs to be more details printed on the back cover. The bottom strip is too sparse. The inside images are all nicely linked to each other but the building doesn't fit in with the colour scheme. The inside images are a bit plain - maybe add in lyrics or dedications on one or two of the panels? The logo and text need to be positioned slightly further away from the edge and the track names and numbers should be made slightly smaller.
3
I think you should use a less harsh combination between the black and white on the front cover between the background and the text because the rest of the digipak has a very calm/ relaxing feel. It still needs to stand out but it should be softer on the eye; maybe try some varying shades of brown?
Posted by Olivia Calver
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