G324 - Rough Cut 2 and Feedback

Feedback 1
Work on the cuts; they need to be more on beat and a little more frequent as some shots are "just too long".
The shot at the start and end with the blank polaroid picture is a little too obvious and doesn't obviously act as a metaphor for all the shots. It's really obviously purely black when we are looking over his shoulder.
The end with the friend getting ready isn't obvious enough that its the other child; it looks like the artist still as both are in dark shirts and the face is not on show.

Feedback 2
Put effects on the scenes of the children to ensure that it looks like you are flashing back in time.
Lip syncing is good the majority of the time, but some aspects are slightly off so adjust those.
The actor is really suitable.
The guitar is synchronised really well.
What's going on with the woman?!
Shot of the old arcade is WAYYY too long.